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The Fanfiction was quite a bit more sad then expected, but was still quite cute indeed.

When I first started, the fanfiction had this Children's Book feel to it, and I'm also kinda thinking about reading to children one day.

But as cute as the story is, there was quite a few sad and dark things in the background. 'Mommy' seemed to have hate poor little Ditzy, and fed her Muffens to fed her and make her shut-up. And she takes 'medicine' to make herself feel better. Honestly, this may not be in first person, but it seemed to have been in Ditzy's perspective anyhow.

This story reminds me of Forest Gump, because of all the sad and dark things it showed in the movie, but according to his perspective from his narration, he appears to be completely oblivious too all of it. He appeared to understand things, but he could never really get the depressing details.

I thought 'Daddy' managed to change Mommy's mind because she was showing her bubbles and played with her.... but it was only a desecration so she could abandon the poor little Filly.

I suppose the reason why she was extremely upset about Ditzy was because she 'couldn't move too good' and 'couldn't see too good', so it was quite obvious enough that she was mentally challenged, and Mommy hated her for that.

The ending was just far too sad. As I had said earlier, I at first thought Mommy had changed, but then I found out the truth as I had read further. I didn't have the 'Why am I not crying' reaction, more like just 'No... this can't be...', I wanted to doubt, I wanted to find some other conclusion, but it was far too obvious.

So, the question remains; what happened after that? Did Ditzy eventually wonder where Daddy was, and tried to find them; but to no avail? Did she eventually give up, and raised herself, and became a Deliver Pony? Or perhaps she tried to find many a job, like helping Rainbow Dash with fixing the City Hall or whatever that was. I suppose sense Bubbles was the only thing she was good at, that's why it was her Cutie-Mark. Perhaps maybe she dose that all the time, wondering where Mommy and Daddy had gone.

You know, a while ago far before I found out about this, a song called 'Where Rich Ponies Go' by SimGretina inspired me to write a Fanfic about it, based off of the lyrics. The cover had Ditzy Doo on it, so I worked with her as the main character. Perhaps maybe I can consider that a sequel to Bubbles. No, it IS a sequel to Bubbles, this shall be what happened to Ditzy AFTER the events of Bubbles.

The author's note said that anyone can do anything they wanted, so I'll do that. I'll re-make that Fanfiction one day! One day...

This Fanfiction was great, and the author ever so Brilliant- so why did he\she decided to be Anonymous? Is it that Anonymous relates to this, and feels far to deep and depressed to let anyone know who created this? Perhaps Anonymous is simply modest, and doesn't want any glory about it- perhaps it's both.

All n' all, Bubbles was cute, heart warming- yet dark, and touching. It is a Fanfiction that at first looks like a simple cute Slice-of-Life, but turns out to be far more. It had also given me inspiration for my earlier Fanfic; Where Rich Ponies Go. Thank you, Anonymous, for writing a very heartwarming, touching, inspiring story.

All My Best,
- Leonardo Oliver Osborn
Leonardo Reviews: Bubbles
So, this is my first official review. I was originally planning on starting with The Amazing Spiderman II, but there was many a film I wanted to start with.

It was on Google Docs, so there was no way to review it- or so I had thought. It's a brilliant start, and I plan to do more. Maybe The Amazing Spiderman II can be next, perhaps.

Please share your thoughts on my review, and Bubbles itself.

All My Best,
- Leonardo Oliver Osborn
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Applebloom and Granny Smith by DrWhoFan611
Applebloom and Granny Smith
Apple Bloom and Granny Smith- A Swope They'll Never Forget. The title was too long to shove in there.

This is a coming soon story, as soon as it is approved on FIMfiction. The link is coming soon.
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For those of you who care; I had just reached my 5th Blog on Tumblr, and the celebration was a bit bigger then expected... please read this...
www.tumblr.com/blog/askleonard…
Zecora with a Fedora by DrWhoFan611
Zecora with a Fedora
This is going to be my new second character. For the moment, I am merely using her on Youtube as a second account to comment with. She is basically Zecora, from, like, some alternate universe or something. I don't have much of a purpose for her yet, but I am thinking about using her for my reviewing series I am gonna make someday. For now, she's simply a second character for me, a Side-Kick, if you must. All artist out there who actually cares, please make a better and clearer version of this. Lemme' know if you have any ideas for her.
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Miss me? I bet you don't, but who gives a crap? Anyway, for those who do care, I had finally moved to a new place, and had fully (mostly) unpacked! And I have internet again! So, after all this time, I had been thinking, this is a place for art, not funny pictures, like the 7 1-ups = 1 7up. So, I had decided to move those funnies\copy-and-pasts and move them to funny junk. And as for my Ask Leonardo Oliver Osborn (AKA DrWhoFan611), I will start a new one on Tumblr, where there is a bigger chance people might ask me questions there. So, lets forget about this being my main blogosphere, because now that's gonna be Tumblr. I'll let ya know when I had fully figured it out, and give ya a link! Until, Allons-y!

All My Best,
- Leonardo Oliver Osborn
The Fanfiction was quite a bit more sad then expected, but was still quite cute indeed.

When I first started, the fanfiction had this Children's Book feel to it, and I'm also kinda thinking about reading to children one day.

But as cute as the story is, there was quite a few sad and dark things in the background. 'Mommy' seemed to have hate poor little Ditzy, and fed her Muffens to fed her and make her shut-up. And she takes 'medicine' to make herself feel better. Honestly, this may not be in first person, but it seemed to have been in Ditzy's perspective anyhow.

This story reminds me of Forest Gump, because of all the sad and dark things it showed in the movie, but according to his perspective from his narration, he appears to be completely oblivious too all of it. He appeared to understand things, but he could never really get the depressing details.

I thought 'Daddy' managed to change Mommy's mind because she was showing her bubbles and played with her.... but it was only a desecration so she could abandon the poor little Filly.

I suppose the reason why she was extremely upset about Ditzy was because she 'couldn't move too good' and 'couldn't see too good', so it was quite obvious enough that she was mentally challenged, and Mommy hated her for that.

The ending was just far too sad. As I had said earlier, I at first thought Mommy had changed, but then I found out the truth as I had read further. I didn't have the 'Why am I not crying' reaction, more like just 'No... this can't be...', I wanted to doubt, I wanted to find some other conclusion, but it was far too obvious.

So, the question remains; what happened after that? Did Ditzy eventually wonder where Daddy was, and tried to find them; but to no avail? Did she eventually give up, and raised herself, and became a Deliver Pony? Or perhaps she tried to find many a job, like helping Rainbow Dash with fixing the City Hall or whatever that was. I suppose sense Bubbles was the only thing she was good at, that's why it was her Cutie-Mark. Perhaps maybe she dose that all the time, wondering where Mommy and Daddy had gone.

You know, a while ago far before I found out about this, a song called 'Where Rich Ponies Go' by SimGretina inspired me to write a Fanfic about it, based off of the lyrics. The cover had Ditzy Doo on it, so I worked with her as the main character. Perhaps maybe I can consider that a sequel to Bubbles. No, it IS a sequel to Bubbles, this shall be what happened to Ditzy AFTER the events of Bubbles.

The author's note said that anyone can do anything they wanted, so I'll do that. I'll re-make that Fanfiction one day! One day...

This Fanfiction was great, and the author ever so Brilliant- so why did he\she decided to be Anonymous? Is it that Anonymous relates to this, and feels far to deep and depressed to let anyone know who created this? Perhaps Anonymous is simply modest, and doesn't want any glory about it- perhaps it's both.

All n' all, Bubbles was cute, heart warming- yet dark, and touching. It is a Fanfiction that at first looks like a simple cute Slice-of-Life, but turns out to be far more. It had also given me inspiration for my earlier Fanfic; Where Rich Ponies Go. Thank you, Anonymous, for writing a very heartwarming, touching, inspiring story.

All My Best,
- Leonardo Oliver Osborn

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Hello, My name is Leoardo Oliver Osborn (I want to change my user name to that, but it won't let me). And I make photo shop stuff. Pretty much copy and past, and edit the background, make sure they fit, then TADA! I can also make 'literature' here as well! So... YAY!!!

I will be happy to use anything you want me to use, and please make request, because I'm rusty at this, and I'm slowly putting in my old stuff, but also making new stuff. So please help me with some ideas! I can also be found in these links.

To see some of my fun commentary (that people seem to enjoy), then come here!
www.youtube.com/user/DrWhoFan6…
If you like Team Fortress 2 as much as I do, as the same with Fallout: Equestria, then come here!
steamcommunity.com/profiles/76…
If you want to see some Fanfics from me, and gather some more info about me (or go to my Ask-Me thing here) then come here!
www.fanfiction.net/u/4688494/
Fan of MLP? ME TOO!!! Check out some of my FIMfiction here!
www.fimfiction.net/user/Leonar…

Well, thanks for reading my profile, and please check out those links, check out my stuff here, and don't for get to comment on ANYTHING!!!

All My Best,
- Leonardo Oliver Osborn

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Welcome to DeviantArt!
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DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks i guess. I'v been here for about a mouth. And it won't let me post any of my art.
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Terramoo Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome. Do you do vector art? Have you tried converting some of your art to png(excluding vector art)?
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DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know what "Vector" means. And what's a png?
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